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Sky Pride Vol. 3 Chapter 24- Disgraceful Sparring
Word got around Bamboo Medicine Hut quickly. By the time the tea party reached the martial practice courtyards, a sizable crowd had gathered. Hong huddled with Tian and gave him some last minute instructions.“No matter what he says, don’t kill him, don’t cripple him, don’t destroy his cultivation, don’t castr...
Sky Pride Vol. 3 Chapter 23- Young Master Tian
Tian realized he was being rude about ten seconds after people started staring at him. He jolted to his feet and cupped his hands towards the new arrivals, bowing almost ninety degrees. “I am sorry! I was completely lost in my thoughts.”“Understandable. You were just out in the desert, weren’t you?” This from...
Sky Pride Vol. 3 Chapter 22- A Peaceful Life of Cultivation
“So you grow the Red Heartline Grass in rows for easy reaping, but the Coldeye Flowers need to be grown in an array with these other plants?” Tian asked.“Yes! Well, no, you could kind of grow it by itself or spaced out in rows or something, with enough soil amendments and regularly applying supplements. But it gr...
Sky Pride Vol. 3 Chapter 21 The Bamboo Medicine Hut
The disciples started walking onto the flying cloud when Tian spotted a dreadful, expedition destroying problem.“We never resolved the issue of seniority!” Tian exclaimed. “Quickly- which of us is the senior brother or sister? Brother Wang and Sister Su have the highest cultivation, and Brother Wang is the eldest...
Sky Pride Vol. 3 Chapter 20- Thoughts Like A Mountain Stream
Tian clapped his hands together. The loud noise shocked everyone out of their argument. “We are going around in circles. We should take a brTian clapped his hands together. The loud noise shocked everyone out of their argument. “We are going around in circles. We should take a break here. May I trouble Sister Su to...
Sky Pride Vol. 3 Chapter 19- Choking on Mortal Air
They gathered in the common room to sort through what they had put together. Tian passed around his little timeline, which got grim nods ofThey gathered in the common room to sort through what they had put together. Tian passed around his little timeline, which got grim nods of appreciation from Brother Wang and Sister...
Sky Pride Vol. 3 Chapter 18- Finding Today’s Limit
Tian had reached his limit. He hadn’t slept properly, his mind was a mess, and even bickering with Hong had lost all appeal. He would move hTian had reached his limit. He hadn’t slept properly, his mind was a mess, and even bickering with Hong had lost all appeal. He would move his body a bit. Tian walked out into ...
Sky Pride Vol. 3 Chapter 17- A Rock Worth More Than A Kingdom
“You two will remain in the Manor for the next little while. I plan on giving Juniors Wang and Su some more time to work down in the city. T“You two will remain in the Manor for the next little while. I plan on giving Juniors Wang and Su some more time to work down in the city. They are digging up…” Elder Feng ...
Sky Pride Vol. 3 Chap. 16- A Fairy With Bloody Knuckles
“Fairy Maiden descends from the fiery star, unafraid before ten thousand devils.” Hong swung her spear around with one hand, then collected“Fairy Maiden descends from the fiery star, unafraid before ten thousand devils.” Hong swung her spear around with one hand, then collected it and fell into a ready stance. ...
Sky Pride Vol. 3 Chapter 15- Gone But Not Forgotten
Tian was lightheaded from the shimmering, twisting agony of the demon’s finger. It had reached a point of obliteration, where the pain simply overwhelmed rational thought and demanded that the panicked animal do whatever was necessary to escape. Weighed against that was the increasingly loud chant from the Hell Suppr...
Sky Pride Vol. 3 Chapter 14- Trading Heads
Tian took a long moment to try and understand what he was seeing. The girl was dressed in rather good robes. They were a fine silk, bright gTian took a long moment to try and understand what he was seeing. The girl was dressed in rather good robes. They were a fine silk, bright green with gold trim and a blindingly whi...
Sky Pride Vol. 3 Chapter 13- A Local Snake
The shadows lengthened with the setting sun. Then they consumed the mercenary cultivators. “You are only level six. You are doing somethingThe shadows lengthened with the setting sun. Then they consumed the mercenary cultivators.“You are only level six. You are doing something weird to your breath, but I can still ...
Sky Pride Vol. 3 Chapter 12- Flowing Water Becoming a Landslide
Brother Long was Tian’s friend. Brother Long was an elegant young man who cultivated sophistication. He studied the four arts a gentleman scBrother Long was Tian’s friend. Brother Long was an elegant young man who cultivated sophistication. He studied the four arts a gentleman scholar should master with the grace o...
Sky Pride Vol. 3 Chapter 11- The Smokey Shadow of the Demon
There wasn’t a fight. The mortal swung a mallet at Tian and watched in horror as Tian stopped it with a finger, then flicked it hard enoughThere wasn’t a fight. The mortal swung a mallet at Tian and watched in horror as Tian stopped it with a finger, then flicked it hard enough to send the four pound sledge through...
Sky Pride Vol. 3 Chapter 10 Exploding Bad People
Slavery was a concept that only existed on paper for Tian. He knew it existed, something perpetrated by the heretics of the Black Iron GorgeSlavery was a concept that only existed on paper for Tian. He knew it existed, something perpetrated by the heretics of the Black Iron Gorge or some ancient dynasty that died drown...
Sky Pride Vol. 3 Chapter 9- A Daoist in the Garrison
There was a peace to moving with no expectations. Tian jogged to keep up with the returning cavalry, his black robes flapping and his straw…There was a peace to moving with no expectations. Tian jogged to keep up with the returning cavalry, his black robes flapping and his straw… he was never quite sure what to cal...
Sky Pride Vol. 3 Chapter 8 The Red Plume General
Tian needed a sit down after the Elder’s revelations. He wasn’t going to get one.“We are not in a position to completely dismantle the salt trade in the Broad Sky Kingdom, even if we were to disregard the familial interests of our disciples, but this is unendurable. Junior Wang?”“Trade with other salt produci...
Sky Pride Vol. 3 Chapter 7 The Second Supreme Virtue
The tea session was a modest success. While no definitive common points were identified across all four scrolls, there was a definite theme. Where, on balance, should ensuring the common good be balanced against the instinct of all people to better themselves specifically? And, following that question, to what degree d...
Sky Pride Vol. 3 Chapter 6- Making Human Noises, Spotting Immortal Traps
The scroll was written in a deceptively academic style- seemingly dry and clinical, but laced with hidden traps for the unwary reader. Tian would never want to be a scholar, but between studying medical texts, the nakedly propagandic history texts and Grandpa’s heckling, he had honed a few basic instincts. The most c...
Sky Pride Vol. 3 Chapter 5- Making New Friends
The atmosphere on the platform had dropped to freezing. Hong still had her spear out, but it looked like she had forgotten she was holding it. She was, instead, watching her friend carefully fill a bucket with water then adding a carefully measured portion of harsh soap to it. He pulled a mop from his ring, placed it i...
Sky Pride Vol. 3 Chapter 4- Strangers With Familiar Faces
The room was dead silent. Elder Rui was content to let them process his words. It had been a lot. Eventually, Tian stood, bowed with clasped hands and asked “Elder Rui, if I may be so bold as to ask, why the… why are we fighting this war? What exactly do the heretics want?”He was slightly desperate to know at thi...
Sky Pride Vol. 3 Chapter 3- Broken Emissaries
The Daoist Master arrived by sky barge. He didn’t deign to appear before the masses. He summoned Direct Disciple Sung, and through her, gave instructions. A few hours after the Daoist Master arrived, those instructions filtered down to Tian.Tian gathered in a hastily reconstructed reception hall. Tian assumed it was ...
Sky Pride Vol. 3 Chapter 2- First Under The Heavens
Brother Fu stood rooted on the ground, his voice a rolling chant. Each word landed like a graven tablet, like a bronze stele carrying the supreme law.“The things of the world burst out everywhere, and each returns to its own root. Returning to the root is called stillness; this is called returning to destiny; returni...
Sky Pride Vol. 3 Chapter 1- Unrivaled Since Ancient Times
The Heavenly Realm cultivators were the first to run. They were closest to the gathering clouds on their flying swords or swarms of insects or lotus platforms. They could see the clouds crackling with malevolent red and purple lightning. They could feel the heavenly fury, feel the utter violence of the coming storm. So...
Rolling into Vol. 3 and a Mea Culpa
TL,DR: Longer answer-I goofed on the fingers. Finger Truthers were right. I miscounted. Somehow I got into my head that he had regrown his ring fingers, and was looking forward to posting a "Signature Look of Superiority" meme when I pointed out where that happened. But unless I managed to Double-Miss, when I w...
Sky Pride- A True Legacy (Alternate POV Chapter)
“A man needs a creed. Without a creed, he’s lost. So let me ask you, Daoist Kong, what’s your creed?”“Immortality at all costs. And yours, Daoist Gobek?”“Don’t have one. I’m lost.”Daoist Gobek, as he was known in Stillearth Refuge, smiled thinly and took a long drink of wine. He didn’t consider hi...
Vol. 3 of Sky Pride Begins Monday, June 23!
Whew! Quite the wild ride. Thank you all so much for reading and supporting Sky Pride. It is your support that lets me turn my passion into a career. I will get out that side chapter next week, and use the rest of the time to recharge and load up on new ideas for Vol. 3. Now, long time readers of mine will know I like ...
Sky Pride Vol. 2 Chapter Chapter 55- A Father in Old Age
“Junior Tian, sit down!”“I need to go to my brothers. I need to be there with them!”“Tian! No!” Hong yelled.“I have to go to them!” He lurched for the side of the platform. Elder Rui snarled and made a sharp gesture. Tian collapsed, flattened against the wood.“You think I don’t know how you are feel...
Looking for suggestions on a side chapter
I don't want to leave you guys high and dry all week during my vacation, so I thought it might be fun to write a one-off Sky Pride chapter from a different POV. Something from Hong's perspective, or Elder Rui, or even the heretics. I'm not putting up a poll because I'm most interested in what ideas you...
Sky Pride Vol. 2 Chapter 54- A Son’s Love
Four demonized hawks clawed at the barrier around the base. They had already dumped their payload of zombies and more demon summoners must be hidden in the desert because there were dozens of the horrors hammering away at the defenses.Tian knew the barrier had been strengthened after the last attack. It was still holdi...