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The Reincarnation of Alysara. Chapter 10: Bonds
AN: I thought that I'd get this chapter done a long time ago, but life got in the way. There's going to be a 4-year time skip between the end of this chapter and the next, and I want to do two or three side chapters that take place in that time. I want them to be more slice-of-life showcasing Aly's normal ...
Interlude: Nexus History
AN: House renovations is done, had some medical issues but I think that's gotten better. Next month should be a lot more productive. A main story chapter should be ready this weekend or a couple days after. I also plan to do one of these for Kayafe's story eventually, but it's going to be a long story even ...
The Reincarnation of Alysara. Chapter 9: Essences
AN: been doing house renovations since my house has a lot of water damage. Basically, we have to replace all the siding, and some structural support needed fixing. I will try to get more chapters done next month since the work is about 70% done.AN2: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google Docs here:https...
The Reincarnation of Alysara. Chapter 8: Questions
AN: Two chapters this month! I hope to get three out next month.AN2: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google Docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KfgD50r0mHRSFfxDtsi0GRf8HegCib7IhKFV8Zx5w2A/edit?usp=sharing__________________________________________________________________________Light Season has...
The Reincarnation of Alysara. Chapter 7
AN: I am Back! Sorry for the hiatus, I needed to take some time to care for my mental health. Thank you all for your support and concern. I hope to earn your trust back eventually by writing the best version of TROA as I can and completing the first book for Alysara.AN2: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the ...
The Reincarnation of Alysara. Chapter 6
AN1: Happy Halloween! Sorry, this took so long. I'm trying to work things out. AN2: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google Docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/10yY5MrKF_rZGJ1DyOVcTqdKK7AqevhGIQb7dv2pPFFE/edit?usp=sharing_______________________________________________________________________...
The Reincarnation of Alysara. Chapter 5
AN: Sorry this one took so long. I don't have really an excuse other than it turned out to be harder than I expected.AN2: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google Docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/15mz8ykW9NQ2KRHcELxisvXAGDQOihR0oFz7IfZRpFfI/edit?usp=sharing_________________________________...
The Reincarnation of Alysara. Chapter 4: A Mother's Worry
AN: I'm not entirely happy with this chapter. Something just feels off about it, and I can't figure out what. Not too much was changed, and I can't keep reading it over forever, so here it is. I really hope the next chapter will be out faster. Again, I'll aim for next week or, at the very least, before ...
The Reincarnation of Alysara. Chapter 3
AN: This chapter required more work than I anticipated. I'm still going to aim for sometime next week for the next chapter since I want to get my production back to what it used to be.AN2: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google Docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lX1ZaOufu5JIBq_rLeqDZNOcoR...
The Reincarnation of Alysara. Chapter 2
AN: Again, sorry for the long wait. The next few should be a lot quicker, 'm going to aim for next week.AN2: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google Docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1K3Xqv8Y54ETl7twOwYBCeD8MqzC3QqbTGBjTAG0ts-0/edit?usp=sharing______________________________________________...
The Reincarnation of Alysara. Chapter 1: Life Anew
AN: Sorry this one took so long. For the longest time something bugged me about it even though it was basically done. Eventually, though, I did figure out what was bothering me. The chapter was basically one long exposition of the town. There was very little input or involment from Aly, at least nothing that was showni...
The Reincarnation of Alysara. Prologue: Legacy
Art by Maury.This is the long-awaited rewrite.AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google Docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qkJ9RPZh1AxRHbXeEmAtmY2KAca3LRWVIq-2ab11aKg/edit?usp=sharing__________________________________________________________________________Stars twinkle around me like a clou...
Update
First, I want to say sorry for the slow updates. I have been having trouble with motivation, and writer's block. It's not burn out but rather that the current rough draft has problems that have caught up to me. The source of my lack of motivation and block is that every time I try to write something, my instinc...
Chapter 251: Reunited
-----AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google Docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Wjy-mtlRIQFvEZ7w6vcj-lv5gbJyXGTmDCH5Elu3hqo/edit?usp=sharing__________________________________________________________________________Yrania POV:The past two days have been such a delight! It’s not often she ...
Chapter 250: Roots
-----AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google Docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jmUy2uVeJ7_5K3ILeSmgYSRxbGjNmJFw2hxJ1szDdTc/edit?usp=sharing____________________________________________________________________________We fly over to Temple Island, and I place my Eyewraps and Library on the M...
Chapter 249: One Thousand
-----AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google Docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GfzyXAyJM_PKLAGaSWKCmMvRTRSPEPmZqGQMgkcccvE/edit?usp=sharing____________________________________________________________________________Elf POV:“The vote is four to three,” Cardinal Oak declares. “We will...
Capter 248: Living Mana
-----AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google Docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/13UH7wEWy_vQrUkofmgT9Js4ALypd1be2gq4oOL3HNZM/edit?usp=sharing____________________________________________________________________________I watch as the leftover storm cores attract and repel each other, eventual...
Chapter 247: Hyper Mana Breakthrough
-----AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google Docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/10p2aAtRecBWkRKVd68UWzXd4PJit5ZHgpcxX80k8I2c/edit?usp=sharing____________________________________________________________________________This storm core has been my biggest challenge yet. Both me and Kayafe have...
Chapter 246: Hyper Mana
-----AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google Docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NcjiRLB5YlhDmUUIpTu_8km50u5fUs5WL_LJ0KT9UBo/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________Kayafe has finally done it! She mastered [Sense Mana]! Now, she just n...
Chapter 245: Stormy Revelation
-----AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google Docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gY2Ui3clVKbRW5CWTnVL32RtLRI2tmD59b-RcR6FrVI/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________Back in Alaxan, Kayafe, Alexander, and the Oathbound return from the E...
Chapter 244: Another Storm on the Horizon
-----AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google Docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1f49T_qxc1Q_GoMyL_4mNRggulCx0Yd8uwGPBK_gPqhg/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________I realize I might have saved a lot of lives by suggesting to pursue pe...
Chapter 243: Final Answer
-----Sorry for the long delay. I Suffered from Balder's Gate three-itis. It's a serious addicting game but I'm pretty much over it now. Was a little hard to get back into the swing of things, and that is a little reflected in the first half of this chapter. As I have been doing so, I'll post public so i...
Chapter 242: The Stages of Bonds
-----AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google Docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YNjI9DaJdTnvERKyVgUWm2jMWNpOk3yTFuqoZcO_yaE/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________“So, what stage of your Bond are you on?” Alexander asks.“I have...
Chapter 241: Tea With the Emperor
-----I'm sorry for the inactivity, writer's block hit me hard. I'm trying to get back on the horse and hope next month will be better. I will keep posting public chapters until my schedule returns to normal, so if you feel you didn't get your money's worth this month, then feel free to unsubscribe, ...
Chapter 240: Kayafe and Alexander
-----No Cliff. Tried to include a post chapter POV but was having a hard time writing it. I'll try to have one next chapter.AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google Docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SNr8mfSKXg56wu_HuH-5bOpq-Nm6R_0ignU0Dutylko/edit?usp=sharing___________________________...
Chapter 239: Qualifications
-----No Cliff.AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google Docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/15KGhN7SqOp_gUmwEeuqD9_kyVXBh-350V0VlGbuxRYk/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________This battle has been very brutal, enough to make me queasy. Y...
Chapter 238: Slaying Elementals
-----No Cliff. This chappy starts with a flashback.AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google Docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QreBNkKsQnnxsnvx6_VVPi8AQLp0W4PflZU3FZzdmvk/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________Alexander breathed heavi...
Chapter 237: Chaos of War
-----No Cliff.AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google Docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PdOwHl1avC7duoOBJR10U_EHTIpNU87DH0fJM4djHGI/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________How effective is antimatter in a battle? I ponder as I form a...
Chapter 236: A Look Below
-----No Cliff.AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google Docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1yOiEd1fKsPaaoCdky0--QMYw_yNaiueB4SGY6hggUNs/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________I am not a strategist, nor do I know of the abilities of any ...
Chapter 235: Mental Battle
-----No Cliff.AN: Got some editing suggestions? Suggest it on the Google Docs here:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mejOtW1OX-qTakqo7I3LACWKz01cSEgFNQOjILG_m7M/edit?usp=sharing________________________________________________________________________________“We’ll reach the border in one day,” Lord Commander Tal...
