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Chapter 585: If You Put It That Way

🕑 Added 2025-07-24 23:45:00 +0000 UTC

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Havics Child

Jace making prank calls for revenge... Yes

Chloe

Tyftc

Quentin Cozzi

Thanks for the chapter!

Dan

I’m loving this arc. Thanks Sunrise!

Michael Lepak

This is definitely in my top 5 favorite series,, very fun reading,, it's not easy to pull off a series with such an OP MC and still have it be interesting.. thank you for the good reading.. I'm glad I got my membership abd was able to read ahead.

John

I’d like to see a full on champion brawl. Invader champions vs at least most of the guardians. Bring in Vanessa and some of the other strong non-guardians to clear out enemy troops. And then see how well Trisha does blocking a dozen elements at once.

John

My brain and body are weakening. How will I survive without at least 3 chapters a week?!? In fact just to be on the safe side you should just write a whole book every week. But really, take care of yourself first, writing second.

DJ Lamm

Couldn't agree more...

SmokeJam

While I rather enjoy the arc and reading more is always good, mental health and stability comes first. Take care of yourself!

Reno

Please don't set a time limit for yourself. More than us, it's you who has to enjoy the story. It's been great so far.

Onyxfrost

Thanks for the chapter.

Seth

Damn good chapter.

Denalo Zecon

For Derek he worries about the Void damaging his equipment. This is a valid concern. But because of how Void Harbinger, and the Void Armor were created...IMO those two items should be fine while in the Void. They both absorbed 8 to 12 hours of Derek's Void aspected Mana. Okay so while they should both be fine in the Void, they are both not replaceable and extremely expensive; so Derek would NOT be testing if the Void would damage them by choice. OTOH maybe in a future book after Derek has left the Davenresh System, he gets into a fight WHILE he is in the Void? With a Void Beast or with another entity that can travel through the Void. So Derek loses all equipment besides the Star Boots, Void Harbinger and his Void Armor = this is how he finds out they can endure the rigors of the Void just fine, when he has to use them while fighting in the Void. This is very speculative and is a more long term 'what if idea' so I have no idea if something like this will happen in the story. Huh the Void Harbinger is Soul Bound to Derek and he stores its energy template within his Aura or body or soul. The armor being bound to Derek should also be able to be stored in whatever specific way that he can store Void Harbinger; without an inventory ring or inventory bracelet needed. Well for whatever reason the armor was not described as doing that; Derek seems to need the normal storage items for the Armor. So...if Derek creates a void barrier to protect a person or his storage ring/bracelet? then an attack that was distracting enough would disrupt that void barrier. Same for Silvi and her Void Pots; if she got distracted enough the Pot will dissipate. So for my very speculative scenario where Derek finds out the armor can survive in the Void. Derek and Silvi are traveling somewhere via the Void. All his items except for Void Harbinger are stored in the Pot Silvi created. They encounter a Void Beast much stronger than Asher, and fight. Silvi's Void Pot gets destroyed and almost all items inside the Pot are destroyed...but the Armor is unharmed. Silvi is really angry she lost a lot of her prepared meals and ingredients, but Derek is relieved the Armor survived exposure to the Void. Then the fight continues.

Patrick Burns-popieniuck

Damn good chapter You got this take your time rushed work is never good work. & good work is never rushed

JW Saxby

Tftc!

Cody Cahill

The obvious answer here is Derek and sylvi both use void travel and each carry more people with them while protecting them with the void, or sylvi makes a REALLY big pot with void creation and puts 3-4 people in it. Derek can go through first and get them to focus him then have sylvi bring the others after the fight starts. Sylvis dragon fire is absurd since she has Derek’s stats so if they take away his void and spacial abilities sylvi still has absurd agility and she can just rocket into people and burn them. Derek can just tank hits with his mythical armor and be a front liner, Jace can just do Jace things and turn into a psychopathic battle maniac. Bring Avery and braxi and it’s literally a wrap. Avery is a high agility ranged fighter who also excels at hand to hand combat and braxi is the second strongest on the world. They could easily mop up the invasion in one go.

Andrew Pettit

Take your time homie. We appreciate the hard work that you put into this for us.

Raymond Mouton

Thanks for the chapter.

Noname

What if old goblin and braxi attacked forcing Trischa to activate her ability and than Derek and Silvi clean up

SunriseCV

Haha. Well… I also have a deadline I have to hit. I’m honestly still trying to get book 8 finished and the manuscript edited in time to move the Amazon release up a month or two. Fun fact: I was planning around 145k words for this book and to move the release up four months to July/August. But my brain love being crazy and now we’re at 215k words… I may take some time off after this book 8 releases though. Probably not more than two weeks, but that may help me reset a bit.

Noname

Villy, having fun watching Jake get beat up

brandon barr

I really appreciate how after like 600 chapters we like Jace. There were lots of different misdirects and this is my favorite way it could have ended.

joel southard

Thank you for the chapter. Take all the time you need.

Khal Lee

LoL void bunny for the win!!! It would be pretty funny if a bunny wrecked a good chunk if not the entire council. Thanks for the chapter. Get some good R&R; butnif uoubcan push a good chapter great! Dont make self sick again though! Hugs! Inquiring minds needs to know what the Bunny will do!!

Denalo Zecon

The story is something I look forward to reading. Personally I would much prefer that you take two weeks or a full month off than get fully overwhelmed with life...and having long term problems. I had an extreme bad period where I could not work for years + depression. I am on disability now so it is fair to say I never fully recovered from that. Anyway just because you have posted weekly for about five years does not to me mean you have to do the same until whatever is the end of the System Universe series. Taking a week to a month off is better by far than going into a six month slump where you can barely write or do other important tasks. I suggest switching to a 4 chapter per month promise after the end of this arc, but with the option to post an extra chapter per week when you are in the groove. This would reduce your stress while also avoiding your possible worries about the downsides of posting less than once per week. Your stress would be halved if you do not worry about more than one chapter per week...well not certain but maybe.

Jordan

I like Jace he’s a massive troll just there for a good time.

Red45jimster

Tftc

Jordan

Great idea Jace & Silvi trolling the enemy team would be hilarious!!!

Vilastromoz

Take your time, you are definitely the most human writer. A few authors even do a chapter a day, which is crazy. Keep up the good!

Jennifer Leigh

Jace is so hard core

Aviel

thanks for the chapter take your time

MistuhBogan

Bro... You're good man. You were only supposed to give two... Don't act like you suck because you didn't go above and beyond one time. Get the hell over it.. you can be plus ultra next week or something. Next month maybe, we don't really care so long as they keep coming an you are healthy man. Go enjoy your family. Why don't you take a week off in two weeks. Staycation with your family.. on us.. what do you say boys?

Braden Moody

Love Jeffrey's idea. And tftc

Jeffrey Pearson

Please please... let Silvi come out of a void travel proclaiming she is the one that's the Ascending Monarch....lol


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