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Undying Empire: B1 — 35. A Choice To Be Made

🕑 Added 2020-05-16 07:28:16 +0000 UTC

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SME

I'll get to that before I start writing TO when I wake up ^_^7

Denis Dube

Thanks for the chapter. Nice to see Elinor show a bit of humanity with the tears for her parents. Two confusing bits that may need some attention: * "Project my part to the Ri’bot", what part? Wrath? * "and not be something I’m terrified of doing", on re-read this snippet is fine on its own but it's buried in a rambling sentence


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