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2.22

🕑 Added 2017-05-17 00:13:06 +0000 UTC

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I like the continued joke of Olesm being involved in something probably really important but being brushed away due to more present and pressing events.

pirateaba

I have no idea what's happening. I've been tired and out of focus when writing--maybe that's the key? Or maybe I'm just getting better? Glad you like it!

Not confusing at all, but I heard it instead of reading it so I'm not sure If that makes a difference as hearing is quite slower than reading. On a second note: Your chapters feel somehow more complete lately. Its like when I'm through I don't "need" to know what happens next instead I can just enjoy it and start doing other things, knowing that the next chapter will be available soon enough. Ps.: Thanks for the word count

pirateaba

Once again, mindset. She's not going out hunting for trouble and she fought with her fists -- not weapons. If anything, she might earn a type of protector/defender class or a brawler one...if she was thinking in those terms. Erin's an innkeeper though, and to her, this is just defending her inn.

Dustin S.

Well written, and able to follow! It definitely "worked". My only question is: she has a warrior class, right? Why didn't that class level? I know they weren't "trying" to kill her, but still a pretty brutal brawl.