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TO Rewrite: B1 — 15. Hacker’s Introduction

PoV:1. Rachel Park (Our Curious Lunar Hare!)TO Rewrite IndexPrevious ChapterGoogle Document (In-line Comments)--------------------Instead of sleeping, Rachel decided to enter her inner world through the meditative state and take the time to better analyze everything that happened in the last forty-eight hours. She play...

PokéSync: B3 — 14. Registration

Edit: I made some corrections >.> such as Alice suddenly having Eevee genetics and being able to de-evolve... Lol.PoV:1: Rhea (Our Blonde Rising Aura User MC!)Pokemon Map I Loosely Use For Visual Aid: The distance between areas might be different, some cities are somewhat incorrect, a few routes have been labeled incor...

TO Rewrite: B1 — 14. The Celestial Unicorn

Author Note: Okay! Found the time to go over the edits today. I hope things are a bit tighter and clearer for those that haven't gotten to it yet.PoV:1. Rachel Park (Our Curious Lunar Hare!)TO Rewrite IndexPrevious ChapterGoogle Document (In-line Comments)--------------------Rachel leaned against the inside of the ...

UE Poll: Add Ending Status Sheet At End Of Vol?

So, next chapter will have the last chapter in the volume and another one post after it (on the same day) that has all of her ending stats/Feats/etc. for the book.I feel like that's something that all RPG-style books should do but I'm generally too busy to read (if I'm reading I'm not writing), so... I ...

PokéSync: B3 — 13. A Doppelganger's Support

PoV:1: Rhea (Our Blonde Rising Aura User MC!)Pokemon Map I Loosely Use For Visual Aid: The distance between areas might be different, some cities are somewhat incorrect, a few routes have been labeled incorrectly, and some cities aren't listed, but it's the best I've found.Pokemon IndexPrevious ChapterGoogl...

TO Rewrite: B1 — 13. A Turbulent Reunion

Author Note: I think all the editors have gone over it now. Less bit of emphasis on the whole Scarlet 'sister' aspect and more on Rachel gradually becoming more open to friendship, but she is using Scarlet. Tightening sentences, etc.PoV:1. Rachel Park (Our Curious Lunar Hare!)TO Rewrite IndexPrevious ChapterGoo...

PokéSync: B3 — 12. To Vermilion!

PoV:1: Rhea (Our Blonde Rising Aura User MC!)Pokemon Map I Loosely Use For Visual Aid: The distance between areas might be different, some cities are somewhat incorrect, a few routes have been labeled incorrectly, and some cities aren't listed, but it's the best I've found.Pokemon IndexPrevious ChapterGoogl...

TO Rewrite: B1 — 12. Planting Seeds

PoV:1. Rachel Park (Our Curious Lunar Hare!)TO Rewrite IndexPrevious ChapterGoogle Document (In-line Comments)--------------------Unable to keep her tail from bristling, Rachel at least managed to keep her ears from going completely straight; she even relaxed them to an extent with some conscious effort, bending the so...

PokéSync: B3 — 11. Spite

PoV:1: Rhea (Our Blonde Rising Aura User MC!)Pokemon Map I Loosely Use For Visual Aid: The distance between areas might be different, some cities are somewhat incorrect, a few routes have been labeled incorrectly, and some cities aren't listed, but it's the best I've found.Pokemon IndexGoogle Document (You ...

TO Rewrite: B1 — 11. System Testing

PoV:1. Rachel Park (Our Curious Lunar Hare!)TO Rewrite IndexPrevious ChapterGoogle Document (In-line Comments)--------------------Ears passively scanning for potential information that she could use, Rachel made sure Scarlet was okay and decided to test the waters. Ominous paths continued to open up to her and her fami...

PokéSync: B3 — 10. Supernova

PoV:1: Rhea (Our Blonde Rising Aura User MC!)2: Rhea's Pokemon (Should Keep Things Secret ;) hehe)3: Rhea's PokemonPokemon Map I Loosely Use For Visual Aid: The distance between areas might be different, some cities are somewhat incorrect, a few routes have been labeled incorrectly, and some cities aren't l...

TO Rewrite: B1 — 10. The Devils Within

PoV:1. Scarlet (Our Vespertine Reaper!)2. Rachel Park (Our Dreaming Lunar Hare!)TO Rewrite IndexPrevious ChapterGoogle Document (In-line Comments)--------------------The sloshing water of the half-emptied pool, soldiers’ movements, and relieved voices that echoed around the college recreational area picked at Scarlet...

PokéSync: B3 — 9. Round One

PoV:1: Rhea (Our Blonde Rising Aura User MC!)2: Alice3: Nova4: RheaPokemon Map I Loosely Use For Visual Aid: The distance between areas might be different, some cities are somewhat incorrect, a few routes have been labeled incorrectly, and some cities aren't listed, but it's the best I've found.Pokemon Inde...

Author Question: Has My Pace Been Improving?

I know the biggest problem most people have with my series is the amount of detail I can put into characterization, which is a double-edged sword. I've been really trying to adapt my style a bit to push things forward more and do more 'tell' not 'show' as I usually show 'everything' in the c...

TO Rewrite: B1 — 9. Full Confession

PoV:1. Rachel Park (Our new Lunar Hare!)TO Rewrite IndexPrevious ChapterGoogle Document (In-line Comments)--------------------Forcing her legs to remain steady on her passage through the hallway, Rachel slowed a bit when Roy—the green beret that spoke Korean—motioned for her to stop after obtaining the order from M...

PokéSync: B3 — 8. To Battle Island

Edit: Made some structure corrections and fixes; thanks for the feedback. ^_^7PoV:1: Rhea (Our Blonde Rising Aura User MC!)Pokemon Map I Loosely Use For Visual Aid: The distance between areas might be different, some cities are somewhat incorrect, a few routes have been labeled incorrectly, and some cities aren't l...

Pokesync Wednesday; Tuesday Mom Needs Me

My mom can’t drive and she needs me to take her to appointment throughout the evening, so I’ll need to push Pokesync to Wednesday.

TO Rewrite: B1 — 8. The Reaper's Gift

PoV:1. Rachel Park (Our new Lunar Hare!)TO Rewrite IndexPrevious ChapterGoogle Document (In-line Comments)--------------------Rachel smoothly jumped over the wave Selvaria created, using the wall to delay enough to flip back to the floor; Anthony helped keep Zoe stable as many of the soldiers braced however they could....

UE Tomorrow; Errands Today

I need to have my car licensed and registered—including oil, getting windshield wipers changed, and general maintenance—before doing a few other things to help my grandfather today, and tomorrow morning I need to take my mom to a doctor's appointment to get some lubricant put in her knees, so I'll need to p...

PokéSync: B3 — 7. The Tale of the Maiden’s Peak

Edit: Let me know what you think about my push of events. Should I have spent more time in this town or do you like how I did this chapter?PoV:1: Rhea (Our Blonde Rising Aura User MC!)Pokemon Map I Loosely Use For Visual Aid: The distance between areas might be different, some cities are somewhat incorrect, a few route...

TO Rewrite: B1 — 7. Crystal Attack

Author Note: Did a bit of cleaning up; hopefully, it reads smoother.PoV:1. Rachel Park (Our new Lunar Hare!)TO Rewrite IndexPrevious ChapterGoogle Document (In-line Comments)--------------------Rachel motioned to Mateo, gaining everyone’s attention after the evacuation order was swiftly changed. Additional informatio...

UE Chapter; Tomorrow

I want a bit more time with this chapter because of how much it sets the tone for the series going forward; a lot needs to happen and the direction in how things will play out may surprise you guys.

PokéSync: B3 — 6. The Spooky City

PoV:1: Rhea (Our Blonde Rising Aura User MC!)Pokemon Map I Loosely Use For Visual Aid: The distance between areas might be different, some cities are somewhat incorrect, a few routes have been labeled incorrectly, and some cities aren't listed, but it's the best I've found.Pokemon IndexGoogle Document (You ...

TO Rewrite: B1 — 6. The Scarlet Hand

PoV:1. Rachel Park (Our new Lunar Hare!)TO Rewrite IndexPrevious ChapterGoogle Document (In-line Comments)--------------------The room was still as Rachel readjusted to the host of noises assaulting her brain again, keeping her hands raised with Zoe and Anthony; she knew they had to comply, given the orders and stress ...

PokéSync: B3 — 5. A Brother's Concern

PoV:1: Rhea (Our Blonde Rising Aura User MC!)Pokemon Map I Loosely Use For Visual Aid: The distance between areas might be different, some cities are somewhat incorrect, a few routes have been labeled incorrectly, and some cities aren't listed, but it's the best I've found.Pokemon IndexGoogle Document (You ...

Pokesync; Update On Health Concerns

I'll start this off by saying I don't have your typical health problem... I just dipped into the 18s of my BMI score, which is very unhealthy. I've always had a problem putting on weight and typically don't like to... eat.It's not like I don't enjoy food. Some of the editors will tell you the in...

TO Rewrite: B1 — 5. I Might Be A Monster, But I’m Still Me

Edit: I forgot to add a section at the end regarding the weapons.PoV:1. Rachel Park (Our Miffed College Muscle-Loving Girl!)TO Rewrite IndexPrevious ChapterGoogle Document (In-line Comments)--------------------Mind in a strange familiar haze between clarity and mania, Rachel smiled at the cool air that tickled the hair...

TO Chapter; Need A Bit More Time; Important Chapter

I think I want a bit more time with this chapter; in writing this now, it sets the tone for Rachel and is a very important chapter for Rachel's character—the series moving forward—as she discovers herself from this transformation and I want to spend a bit more time on it. I'll release the chapter tomorrow.

PokéSync: B3 — 4. An Unfamiliar Body

PoV:1: Alice (Our Newly Evolved Lopunny!)2: Rhea (Our Blonde Rising Aura User MC!)Pokemon Map I Loosely Use For Visual Aid: The distance between areas might be different, some cities are somewhat incorrect, a few routes have been labeled incorrectly, and some cities aren't listed, but it's the best I've fou...

TO Rewrite: B1 — 4. The Azure Moon

PoV:1. Rachel Park (Our Miffed College Muscle-Loving Girl!)TO Rewrite IndexPrevious ChapterGoogle Document (In-line Comments)--------------------Slowly proceeding into the dark forest, Rachel took in her surroundings, seeing less of what was immediately around her and relying on her large ears to feed her all the unsee...