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TDL BK I, CH 16: Howe
Chapter Sixteen: HoweHowe thanked the barmaid with a slap on the arse before reaching for his ale. She scowled before schooling her expression into one of fawning delight. That hint of displeasure only lasted for a split second but he caught it. Howe absentmindedly tossed a few extra gold her way and noted how that fak...
February 2023 Side Story
The results of the last poll are in. The wilderness drafts will not be this month's sidestory. As such, we need a new subject for this month's side story and I have taken the liberty to add some options below.If you're not aware, The Victory Conditions (TVC) was TDL's contender for the place of main sto...
TDL BK I, CH 15: Burdens
Chapter Fifteen: BurdensA series of sharp knocks at his bedroom door tore Dunstan from the dungeon space."What is it and why can't it wait?" he yelled in annoyance.He was so close. Another half hour or two and he would have finalised his first dungeon. Understandably pissed off at this development, Dunstan ...
DC/RH BK II, Ch 26: Ulak Durnspear
Chapter Twenty-six: Ulak DurnspearGuillaume Spiritsorrow, Amaren Kerstead, Ulak Durnspear Nunaira, Thorn Clearwing and Sarod Elaedar, The Heroes of the Grey Reaches, a legendary band of adventurers who saved a northern province of the empire from a necromantic threat that threatened to snuff out all life in the area an...
HoGW BK V, CH 5: Unchained Spirit
Chapter Five: Unchained SpiritValerian delighted in his transformation. Only in this form did he truly feel complete. It wasn't just his body that changed. His aura did so as well. He became one befitting the title of Monarch of the Heavens. He was the conqueror who rewarded his followers and slaughtered his enemie...
TDL BK I, CH 14: Monster Creation
Chapter Fourteen: Monster Creation[The fame of your dungeon grows! +1 AP][Error! Dungeon incomplete!][Achievement invalid!][The fame of your dungeon grows! +1 AP][Error! Dungeon incomplete!][Achievement invalid!][The fame of your dungeon grows! +1 AP][Error! Dungeon incomplete!][Achievement invalid!]From the moment the...
TDL BK I, CH 13: Necessary Steps
Chapter Thirteen: Necessary StepsDunstan watched as the second block of stone was lowered onto the prepared platform with utmost care. The elder levitating it was sweating nervously. She honestly believed this was essential for the establishment of the portal. He wished he could tell the woman that she could relax but ...
DC/RH BK II, CH 25: ... Once Heroes
Chapter Twenty-five: ... Once HeroesIn ages past, the narrow strip of land between The Battlehammer Mountains and the Galronde Forest was left unaligned at the request of the Golden Throne. Dwarves with their stoic and stern demeanours seldom made friends with the mercurial fae and so it was thought wise to leave a buf...
HoGW BK V, CH 4: Secrets Out
Chapter Four: Secrets Out“A steel monolith!?” Valerian repeated in amazement.Within him, his phantasm stirred intrigued by the thought that they’d be facing one of their kind soon.“How?” Valerian asked, pushing up on the butler in a daze.Steel monoliths were rare. Valerian wasn’t sure how rare but he knew e...
HoGW BK V, CH 3: The Ties that Bind
Chapter Three: The Ties that BindValerian grabbed another large book off the shelf, this one was a summarised account of the life of Array Master Taevan Alexius, the legendary figure who invented the three-tier enchantment system and the Onthed glyph script. Placing, his former reading material back, he resigned himsel...
HoGW BK V, CH 2: Talk of Advancement
Chapter Two: Talk of Advancement“If you fail this project then you have failed this course!” Elder Theoren announced to the class.A soft muttering filled the class at the news. Each of the sixteen students sat in front of an expansive array circle that they slowly filled in with glyphs. Their goal was to master it;...
HoGW BK V, CH 1: Progress
Chapter One: ProgressThe sun rose high in the sky, beating down on those beneath it with all the fury of summer. The clear skies, though beautiful, did not help. It was fortunate then that Marrbissi was the premier academy of the mystic arts in the Kingdom of Bathar. A simple charm went a long way in this heat especial...
TDL BK I, CH 12: The Elder Council
Chapter Twelve: The Elder Council"...as we mourn and prepare for Anthony's funeral, let us take comfort in the fact that he would want us to..."Unable to listen to this nonsense with a straight face, Dunstan tuned the Sixth Preceptor out. That they had to cover up the traitor's deeds did not sit right w...
February 2023 Side Story
In the first draft of TDL, the wilderness arc took longer than 6 chapters (it took 8). Scenes were cut in order to preserve the urgency of Dunstan's quest to get back to his sect as well as drive to the meat and plot of the story. Do you want these deleted scenes to be polished and posted as this month's side s...
DC/RH BK II, CH 24: Additional Measures
Chapter Twenty-four: Additional Measures"We have to retaliate!" Proudsprout was yelling. "We can't just let this go unanswered."Other faeries murmured their approval but before this proposal could gather momentum, Thorn jumped in."No! That is the last thing we should do!" he argued. “I bel...
TDL BK I, CH 11: Design Choices
Chapter Eleven: Design ChoicesOne of the most prosperous cities in the Eastern Province was the aptly named Eastern Jewel Citadel. A major reason for this was the fact that it was the headquarters of the Myriad Treasures Pavilion, the most successful merchant guild in the province. Dunstan could still remember his firs...
DC/RH BK II, CH 23: Deliberations
Chapter Twenty-three: Deliberations"Yond decision falls to the crown", the Duke answered lazily as he ate from a platter of conjured grapes. "Mine concern is the fae within its depths."The emperor stared at him with suspicion. "Are you considering letting them have their own court?"The handsome ...
DC/RH BK II, CH 22: Confrontation
Chapter Twenty-two: ConfrontationDuke Galronde and his company whirled around to face the newcomer and found nothing!“I have spent much of my life listening to tales of the mighty Duke Galronde, greatest Faerie Lord in the Empire. I had childhood dreams of one day meeting you and serving in your court. Now, confronte...
TDL BK I, CH 10: Dungeon Building
Chapter Ten: Dungeon BuildingLocked in his room, the first thing Dunstan did was dive into a meditative state. Then, he reached for Felix's memories. Holding his past life in his mind made him all the more aware of how incredible this all was. Meditation existed on Felix's earth but nothing like this. Even here...
Monthly Poll: Story Decision
In Chapter Ten of TDL, it is revealed that in his past life as the game designer Felix Dupont, Dunstan worked himself to death. Should this be changed?Felix's death is a done deal. This choice will affect Dunstan's backstory and characterisation.
TDL BK I, CH 9: Thunderfist Melqart
Important Continuity change: Dunstan's childhood friend's name is being changed from Elil to Melqart. I will try to make the changes reflect across all posts.Chapter Nine: Thunderfist Melqart‘Of fucking course!’ Dunstan cursed mentally as a shirtless Melqart opened the door."What do you want?" asked...
TDL BK I, CH 8: Who can you trust?
Chapter Eight: Who Can You TrustDunstan walked back to his room burdened by his thoughts. Talking with the Preceptor had not alleviated his worries like he had hoped but only magnified them. When he roamed the Desolate Fields, The ‘traitors’ and the danger they posed were nebulous and malicious. It was an indistinc...
TDL BK I, CH 7: Revelations
Chapter Seven: RevelationsAlshiram looked down from the balcony watching the flying boat descending towards the sky dock over the Fair Sky Plaza. Next to him, Dorn breathed out a sigh of relief when Dunstan came into view. He could understand. The boy looked none the worse for wear, a miracle given what he no doubt wen...
Major Changes to Pledges
Major Changes to PledgesAll pledge tiers will be undergoing major changes. part of the reason for this is that some of the previous rewards were difficult to make work because they required a lot of back and forth between the patron and myself.Also, people just weren't interested in naming or creating stuff for the...
DC/RH BK II, CH 21: The Lord of Delirium
Chapter Twenty-one: The Lord of DeliriumIn all the ways that truly matter, the faerie are akin to nature spirits. Leonard Thurnstein, Court Mage, Magister of the Mages Guild and renowned authority on all things faerie describes the fae as truthful though sometimes distorted, reflections of the world around them. Sprite...
VP BK I, CH 3: Reflection
Chapter Three: ReflectionA five-year-old Aelius stood in front of a mirror, his father behind him, hands on his shoulders. Both were occupied by one thing; the reflection of his eyes. They shone with a bright white light that left momentary trails of cloudy dust when he moved. Honestly, their appearance was a surprise ...
VP BK I, CH 2: A Testy Exchange
Chapter Two: A Testy Exchange“Get up!” Titus told his son. “We’re going to spar!”Aelius looked up at his father. The man had come with two treasured blades, one of which he was holding out to him. “Not now, please. Just…just go. Leave me be!”“Stand!” his father said, his tone brokering no room for a...
VP BK I, CH 1: The Void Prince
Chapter One: The Void PrinceThere is a glaring nothingness in The Void, an emptiness so complete that not even darkness could exist. There was no light. No sound. No air. No essence. No time. The Void was as it is, as it was, as it will be, as it always. So empty that it even lacked vacuum. Then, things changed– Spon...
TVC BK I, T 2: Setting out
Turn Two: Setting Out“Are you sure you’re up to this?” I asked again.Terv gave me an annoyed look that expressed just how happy he was to be asked the same question four times. I ignored it. I needed everyone on their A-game today and he was the weak link. Sooner or later people were going to learn of our disastr...
TVC BK I, T 1: Greenmount Fortress
Turn One: Greenmount FortressName: Greenmount Fortress (Unfinished) Tier: 3 star Grade: 2 star Durability: 36% Type: Building/Fortification Stats: 10 836/ 30 000 Description: When Thorin of the Willows seized this land, he imagined a great fortress on the adjoining mountain. It was to be the seat from which he would pr...
