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Chapter 273 Homesteading in a fantasy world

🕑 Added 2023-07-13 12:51:40 +0000 UTC

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Zarik0

Sorry if it can be seem 'aggresive' or etc, here i just try to point out a little thing who jumped in my eye in more details with my bad English (not native language and still learning) The time aspect seem a bit wrong... 2 month max for 100 floor....only 60 days JUST walking for around a day in the FIRST few floor (little in size and very very very easy and zero challenge and so no time consuming at all) is JUST 3 floor?!!? Only 23 of the first floor in 10 day?!?! That seem wrong in the time aspect, to go 100 floor who get bigger and bigger in size and way more hard and challenging as stated (consume way more time in multiple things needing to be done as you go deep and as time pass? in 2 month seem impossible except if they run and rush at max speed all time no? I was more seeing 5-6 floor in first day and 33+ in the first 10 day They seem way to relaxed and not speeding much when in my view they already late if the goal is 100 floor, and they already 'speed up' A LOT (vs 'normal') with MC bypassing trap like he want, meaning they will slow immensely and use/consume way more time later when trap and all others myriad things will start consume their time of only 60 days Well i started writting the comment at the same time as reading the chapter (was still in first part of it), so in the second part MC start to try to speed up a bit and etc :)) still even without that my point still hold for the reason i pointed feel off and also as they get 10 DAYS going slow as fuck at this space with zero talk/though/reaction or etc about it and this aspect when 5 sec of thinking is enough to know they are way way too slow and will not make it at all and that will not do for their stated goal to go the max possible deep they can and if possible reach floor 100

Nathan Victor McGraw

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Nathan Victor McGraw

I’ve enjoyed this series sadly only took 2 days to get caught up. However I am a bit annoyed at the poor grammar and editing. This could be so much better if the editing was improved


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