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Casual Heroing, Chapter 157

🕑 Added 2023-08-03 21:34:22 +0000 UTC

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John Grizzly

honestly really dont like flamina. even before their fight. too haughty and childish and self-absorbed. im hoping she gets to change before she gets booted. the magical slip of paper seems to me that she might choose to do something disastrous due to her short-sightedness tho. UGH i caught up XD

Fowl

I see how you might think that's what I'm doing regarding the women in his life if you have read the previous version, but there's more stuff coming. I don't usually do spoilers, but I don't want you to have a sour opinion of what's about to happen. It's not going in the 'crash all' direction, that's all I'll say. For the 'multiple POVs' issue, yeah, I recognize I went overboard. No excuse there. But at least I can say they are all going to come together rather soon.

wholock202

Yeah I don’t really know how to feel about this chapter is seems a too big a swing in her character and I don’t really feel like it flows . It seems like your doing everything to kill his relationship with all women in his life . Irene flam and even the others , I get that the arc is coming to a end and the big climax and setting up the next school academy arc but if feels to me very rough. Just my thoughts but I would have liked to finish joeys pov training and then maybe have the POV chapters before the big finish begins this breaks up the flow to much.


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