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Chapter 166 - Rescue Mission

🕑 Added 2021-01-01 13:01:05 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Ouch, I knew this one was going to have some mistakes but this is a bit worse than I imagined. The file was corrupted and I had to rush a bit because of new years. Thanks for all the help!

Aldous Russell

Thanks! "eye water" should be "eyes". "pieced of cloth.. was" should be "pieces... were". "away of position" should be "our". "now want" should be "now you want". "getting behind" should be "getting left behind". "into the shell" should be "its". I think "without it changing her trajectory" should be "without changing trajectory". "aid to Ryan" should be "on". "dam eggs" should be "damn". "water the Runir" should be "water Runir". "head," I" should be "head, "I". "cleaning wound" should be "cleaning his wound". Happy New Year!


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