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Chapter 183 - Kobold General

🕑 Added 2021-01-30 13:00:03 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! I went with bearer, since whoever uses the letter as a ripcord doesn't have to be an adveturer. Like if a kid from another room goes there they can still use it.

Aldous Russell

Thanks! I think "of such feat" should be "of such a feat". I think "pulled the information on her tablet" should be "pulled up". I think "Surrounding the 12 largest kobolds" should be "Surrounding it were". I think "Not only she had" would be better as "Not only did she have". "They Idiots" should be "idiots". I think "forward. Worried" would be better as "forward, worried". "plater" should be "platter". I think "each, and as they opened it. A notification" would be better as "each and, as they opened it, a notification". I think "Kobold general" should be "General". I think "emerge victoriously" would be better as "victorious". I think "the room. The dragon" would be better as "the room - the dragon". I think "teleport who ripped it" might be better as "the one who rips it" or "whoever ripped it" and "ripper" might be better as "bearer" or "adventurer". I think "tell us where is Galva" might be better as "tell us where to find Galva".


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