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Chapter 184 - Helping Galva

🕑 Added 2021-02-01 13:00:07 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! It's kind of funny the bow and arrow should be like that in my native language, otherwise it would seem like each kobold had more than a single bow. The same with the kilograms. The common usage is the equivalent of had,

Aldous Russell

Thanks! I think "blue thing in the map" should be "on". I think "vigilant for not to suffer any ambushed" should be "vigilant in order not to suffer any ambush". "on the front" should be "at". I think "faces and a long fluffy tail" would be better as "and long, fluffy tails". "on their waist" should be "waists". "two had a bow and arrows" should be "had bows and arrows" (or 'quivers'). "on the back" should be "in". I think "had 1.5 kilograms" might be better as "was 1.5 kilograms" (it's not wrong, but it's not common usage).


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