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Chapter 175 - Photoshoot

🕑 Added 2021-01-16 13:01:01 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! The towards downward thing hurt me. I re wrote that line too many times lol

Aldous Russell

Thanks! I think "stumbled in a small mushroom" should be "on". I think "those damn mushrooms" should maybe be "these". I think "two separated dungeons" should be "separate". I think "Alas, we prevailed" should "Thankfully" or something, as 'alas' is for regrets. I think "trying to Hard mode" should be "to beat", or something. I think "above the shoulder" should be "her". "Can you keep" should be "can". "tones in of the" should be "tones of". I think "any idea what could it be" would be better as "what it could be". "that I can summon" should be "that it". I think "gestured towards downward" should be "gestured downward".


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