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Chapter 177 - Forest origins

🕑 Added 2021-01-20 13:01:01 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! I keep using period instead of question marks when I'm placing a question outside the dialogue. I need to keep an eye out for that.

Aldous Russell

Thanks! "didn't felt" should be "feel". I think "but only when" should be "but it was only when". I think "where is the boss" would be better as "when the boss room is". "The increased stacked" should be "increase". I think "how much does this goes for" would be better as "how much this goes for". "gold?"Alex" is missing a space. I think "that is, unexpected" would be better without the comma. "What if the dungeon..." should have a question mark.

Theredscare77

Sweet a level up. It’s been a while.


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