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Chapter 178 - Skills and Rest

🕑 Added 2021-01-22 13:00:05 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! I I keep forgetting the ' goes after the S when is a word is plural

Perizou

You are correct, I messed up how many points she got. It was 7 bonus points not 8. Just fixed it!

Aldous Russell

Thanks! I think "made her total be a" would be better as "total a". "all her status" should be "stats". I think "disparity between" would be better as "with". I think "energy behaved on each of them" might be better as "in". I think "so effortless" should be "effortlessly". I think "brace herself to the impact" might be better as "for". I think "mechanic and emotionless" would be better as "mechanical". I think "parent's house" should be "parents' house".

Theredscare77

Thanks for the chapter. I could be wrong but I think she should have 3 points left instead of 2. Going from 19-20 should be 4 points Going from 20-21 should be 5 points Going from 21-22 should be 5 points She has 17 points after the level so 17-4-5-5 = 3


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