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Chapter 180 - The New Dawn project

🕑 Added 2021-01-25 13:00:04 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! This is the last time I place so much trust in the replace tool on word. The Daw thing happened a lot and I tried to replace all of them but one got away T.T

Aldous Russell

Thanks! I think "I rather" might be better as "I'd rather". "Countless business" should be "businesses". "on their hands" should be "in". I think "Around 20 minutes later. A tall..." should be a comma. "pretty of found if it" should be "pretty fond of it". "if you excuse" should be "you'll". "Romeo," I'm" has the speech mark in the wrong place. "New Daw" should be "Dawn". "for the best reporter" should be "from". I think "they slay" should be "slew". "and It would" should be "it". "on its radius" should be "in". I think "installing on the guild" should be "for". I think "possible trillion gold" should be "possibly trillion, gold".


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