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Chapter 204 -The path leads to...

🕑 Added 2021-03-08 13:01:00 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! The problem with using a fruit as a name is that it doesn't flag on grammarly as a mistake when I forget to capitalize it properly lol.

Aldous Russell

Thanks! I think "It's been close to... has been" should be "It had... had started". "glow coming from the path" should be "was coming". "staying on a specific spot" should be "in". I think "and open for us" should be "open it". "long it's been" should be "has it been". "peaches" should be "Peaches". "she could help" should be "help it". "we are giving the meaning" should be "given". I think "work what. Once" would be better as a comma. I think "my ass out" should be "off". I think "front seat" might be better as "front row seat".

Theredscare77

Ahhhhh. I hate cliffhangers. :( Anyways thanks for the chapter.


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