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Chapter 206 - Capri

🕑 Added 2021-03-12 13:01:01 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! I really need to take away the auto capitalize ' I ' option from my word lol

Aldous Russell

Thanks! "I call upon the Guide" has an extra space. I think "creature was with its back towards her" would be better as "had it's back". "If you are the guide" should be "if". I think "She still had could gather" should be "still had time and could" "What type of creature it is" should be "is it". "could either remove her skill" should be "could remove". "who you actually guide" should be "who you've actually guided". I think "How is a city" should be "How was there a city". I think "follow a trail" should be "the trail". "somewhere in the mountain" should be "on". "last one, spend" should be "last one spent".


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