Leaqio.com
perizou from patreon
perizou patreon

Chapter 208 - Healer's Hut

🕑 Added 2021-03-15 13:00:05 +0000 UTC

Comments

Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! I knew the slurped was wrong, but for the life of me I couldn't find the right word

Aldous Russell

Thanks! I think "By all accounts" might be better as "In all respects". "you too" should be "two". "What gives you the levels" should have a question mark. "in that foot" should be "on". "cut it out" should be "off". "middle ages" should be "Middle Ages". "slurped" should maybe be "slurred". "bed who started" should be "which". I think "no other human come here" should be "humans" or "comes". "grandmother cooking" should be "grandmother's".


More Creators