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Chapter 209 - Meeting with a king

🕑 Added 2021-03-17 13:00:06 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections!

Aldous Russell

Thanks! I think "how they call it" would be better as "as they called it". "regrow a member" should be "limb". "table they were sitting on" should be "at". I think "out there, in the mountain" should be "on". "might be for a long time here" should be "might be here for a long time". I think "Although I asked them to wait. The king" would be better as a comma. "human's eyes" should be "humans' eyes". "picked her weapons" should be "picked up". "cheese gameshow" should be "cheesy". "There we go" has the speech mark in the wrong place.


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