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Chapter 214 - Training Partner

🕑 Added 2021-03-26 13:00:05 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections!

Aldous Russell

Thanks! I think "Growing... blacksmiths. She held" should be a comma. "firsts" should be "first". "slender figure wrapped around" should be "wrapped in". I think "tall for their standards" would be better as "by". "No, no, We are ready" should be "we", or have a full stop. "from a handaxe here" should be "to". "Let me try" has an extra space. "doge" should be "dodge".


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