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Chapter 188 - Feral Kobolds

🕑 Added 2021-02-08 13:00:05 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! Yeah, the grease fire is 'cheaper' at its base level, but to make a line of fire big enough she had to keep the spell up for a longer period. Also, the cost is always marked as 'base cost' meaning that any changes applied to the spell, be it to make it stronger or weaker increase the amount of mana required. Weird, the 'fire, she had created' doesn't have a comma in my version, neither it has on RR and WN. Let me fix that. I was weirded out with the sentence where the three kobolds converged, it's hard to make things make sense in a situation like that lol

Aldous Russell

Thanks! "what was it" should be "what was". "use the grease fire twice and the paralyze spell a couple of times" - should that be three times for grease fire? The last time I saw stats for them, grease fire was 35 and paralyze was 55. She's had grease fire for longer, so might have ranked it up. "fire, she had created" shouldn't have a comma. "around one flung" should be "and". I think "backward. Dazed" should be a comma. "rose her handaxe" should be "raised". I think "kobold she was fighting" would be better as "Alex had been fighting", since the subject of the sentence is Hera. I think "one more after cutting... retreat path aimed at" would be better as "one more, after cutting... retreat path, aimed at". "kept dash towards" should be "dashing". I think "voice rang" would be better as "rang out". I think "skidding through the ground" would be better as "along" or "over". I think "mutts for others" would be better as "mutts. For others".


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