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Chapter 190 - The dragon descends

🕑 Added 2021-02-12 13:01:01 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! I kept forgetting to ad the Y in the end of Migthy lol

Aldous Russell

Thanks! I think "What's worse" should have a question mark or colon. "you Blue" should have a comma. "I rather" should be "I'd". "You see that hole" has an extra space. "all in that hole" should be "to". Should "while having her palms towards the crowd" be "holding"? "appear in Hera's back" should be "on". "came to bite her" might be better as "came back". "Might one" should be "Mighty".


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