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Chapter 192 - Kobold VS Kobold

🕑 Added 2021-02-15 13:00:04 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! It's weird, but the ones you mentioned about captions are actually correct. When a phrase starts after the dialogue, it is supposed to be lowercase unless it's a noun. It weirded me out the first time I saw it but after talking to a few English teachers they confirmed it haha. And I REALLY need to remember the extra N in lightning

Aldous Russell

Thanks! I think "grab the Light Fur's leg" should be "grab Light Fur's". "just as Blue" should be "Just". "tree club Blue" should be "tree club, Blue". I think "Alex threw another" is missing a word (and a full stop). I think "Change with me" might be better as "Switch". I think "I can try to make it afflicted" might be better as "try to afflict it". "kill the canine kobold" should be "kobolds". "Heras" should be "Hera's". "chieftains attacks" should be "chieftain's". "after about a minute" should be "After". "thunder was pulled" should be "thunderbolt". "nothing on the spell" should be "in" (and maybe "spell description"). "lighting" should be "lightning" (x3). I think "picked her tablet" should be "drew", or something. I think "stop being in the defensive" would be better as "forgo their defensive posture", or something.


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