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Chapter 193 - Dragon Kin Victory

🕑 Added 2021-02-17 13:01:00 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! I had a weird few days and only managed to get around checking this today, sorry about that.

Aldous Russell

Thanks! I think "we can open now" should be "open it". I think "What is going on" might be better as "What's". I think "have any quest" should be "quests". I think "quickly figure where" should be "figured" or "figured out". I think "Of course it was" should be "she". I think "keep with that crap of a knight" would be better as "keep up that knight crap". I think "want to overdo" should be "overdo it". "in a strict vegetarian diet" should be "on".

Theredscare77

Thanks for the chapter. Great work as usual. This chapter really shows the problems the team has. Each of the six team members have personalities and predispositions that negatively affect team cooperation and trust. Blue is a f***ing idiot with her Leroy Jenkins shit and will most likely get some one killed. Tom literally sacrifices function for form. Which in life and death situations is not a good thing. Runir shows blatant favoritism which can get members killed because he mistimes heals or shields. Bonnie seems to be very judgmental which can work to erode team confidence. Alex overall seems like the one to least likely screw the team. As she seems to be in the background most of the time. Hera seems to have major confidence issues. Though I do believe that is getting better. I still love these characters and want to see them succeed. But man do they have some issues to work through.


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