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Chapter 196 - Entering the Battlefield

🕑 Added 2021-02-22 13:01:01 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! THe fury thing was about the skill. I changed it a bit to make it clearer. I guess it only made sense in my head lol

Aldous Russell

Thanks! "Peter acknowledges" should be "acknowledged". I'm not sure what "They still used fury as anger" is trying to say? I think "carry the tablet" should be "a". "check in all their equipment" should be "on". I think "middle of dogs" might be better as "midst" or "company". "Wolves of the Night previous chieftain" should be "Night's". "Wolve's camp" should be "Wolves' camp". "had a thick grey and white fur" should be "had thick". "It looked like... from it was" should be "He... him".


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