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Chapter 198 - Before the storm

🕑 Added 2021-02-26 13:00:03 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! Removed the hand part to make it less redundant, and changed to "Random Advanced Kobold Supplies" The actual reward can be 'Kobold Supplies (C - A) or Elite Kobold Supplies (D - S) so that might solve any issues later on.

Aldous Russell

Thanks! I think "putting some fruit on her hands" would be better as "gathering some fruit", the hands part is kind of redundant. I think "there is a palm tree... I get lucky... fall in my head" would be better as "there's... I'll get lucky... on my head". I think "Wolves of the Night advances" should be "Wolves of the Night's advance". I think "advanced kobolds supplies" should be "advanced kobold supplies" (for consistency with chapter 183) or "Advanced Kobold Supplies" (for consistency with chapter 193). I guess the grade isn't determined until they finish the mission. "marched at the sound of drums" should be "to". I think "They've met up" should be "They met". "Lose three battalions for the traps" should be "to". I think "The rest stays" should be "stay". "deatly cloud" should be "deadly".


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