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Chapter 199 - Sabotage

🕑 Added 2021-02-27 13:00:02 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! So, weird thing. I checked the ballistae thing when I was writing. Some dictionaries said it's ballistas and others ballistae, For instance, websters says its Ballistae but oxford says Ballistas. Why? I don't have a clue lol so I choose the version that felt better to read since it's a word that is repeated a lot in this chapter. And I Have no clue where the 'by no ways' came from lol

Aldous Russell

Thanks! "ballistas" should be "ballistae" (x6). It's a Greek word, because English is stolen. I think "where everyone would be on" would be better as "was on". "by no ways" should be "means". I think "surrounding its body" should be "their bodies" or "trunks". "cries of help" should be "for". I think "using the mana reinforcement" would be better as "using mana reinforcement". I think "they couldn't stop their barrage" should be "wouldn't". I think "Unfortunately, they were very slow" should be "Fortunately", or "Unfortunately for them". "he secondary weapon" should be "second" or "other".


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