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Chapter 201 - Ups and Downs

🕑 Added 2021-03-03 13:00:03 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! Again the lighting thing x.x I really need to be more carefull.

Aldous Russell

Thanks! I think "out of my chest" would be better as "off my chest". "shifted the vantage" should be "advantage". "on the back of the army" should be "at". "defend the massive boulders" should be "defend against". "lighting" should be "lightning". "weren't quest to do" should be "quests". "close they had to be from" should be "to". "change where the distribution" should be "change the distribution". I think "It would take" would be better as "It would usually take". "the Omega" should be "Omegas". "Dragon Kin has created" should be "have". "count with ours" should be "on".


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