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Chapter 202 - The chasm

🕑 Added 2021-03-05 13:00:04 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! The large group line is much better like that

Aldous Russell

Thanks! "swarm of canine kobold" should be "kobolds". I think "They could be a large group of apprentices from a massive group of masters and anything in between" might be better as "They could have anything from a large group of apprentices to a massive group of masters, or anything in between", or something. I think "on its own" should be "their". I think "the large swords" should be "Their". I think "flying back and landing" would be better as "to land".


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