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Chapter 215 - Giving up a dungeon

🕑 Added 2021-03-27 13:01:00 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! I was kind of excited because the last chapters seemed to have fewer mistakes. I slipped on this one ><

Aldous Russell

Thanks! Should "find anything" be "find anything out"? I think "weird out" should be "weirded". "doesn't like it's her problem" should be "like it, it's". "Hera already know" should be "knew". "Excuse me" has an extra space. "supplies runs" should be "supply". "We spend... if you are" should be "we". Also, no wonder she's a bitch if her period lasts that long. "not only she managed" should be "not only did she manage". "what they humans" should be "the". "It's been some years that human" should be "It had been some years since human". "humans dealt with her periods" should be "their". I think "Trip Wire" should be "Wire Trap". I think "that feeling creating attacks" would be better as "feeling, creating". I think "they didn't test" might be better as "they hadn't tested". I think "or we need to pick food in the storage" should be "or do we need to pick up food from the storage". "did something happened" should be "happen".


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