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Chapter 216 - Lunch Break

🕑 Added 2021-03-29 13:01:58 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections. It's weird that the someplace thing showed up as a mistake in the corrector But I was sure that it wasn't wrong. Next time I'll go with my gut lol.

Aldous Russell

Thanks! "around the build" should be "building". I think "some place else" might be better as "someplace". "She tried to ask about how did that work" would be better as "how that worked". I think "We can take a nice view from" would be better as "There's a nice view of". "places she's been" should be "she'd". "diner" should be "dinner". "Vy" should be "By". "but since" is missing something, maybe "but since... she acquiesced", or something. Also, I ship it.


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