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Chapter 234 - Dealing with the monkeys

🕑 Added 2021-04-30 13:00:06 +0000 UTC

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Aldous Russell

Thanks! I think "Darikon Orangutans territory" should be "Darikon Orangutans' territory". "see blockage" should be "see a". I think "a small gap between one of the rocks" should be more than one. "breakthrough" should be "break through". "that it would work" should be "they". "in such a long range" should be "at". I think "didn't seem that could be swept" would be better as "seem likely to be swept".

Mike G.

Interesting challenges, thanks!


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