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Chapter 258 - It's time

🕑 Added 2021-06-11 13:01:01 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections!

Aldous Russell

Thanks! I think "but she could trigger once per hour rid of most blood and grime from her gear" might be better as "but she could trigger it once per hour to get rid of most blood and grime from her gear". "during her ears" should be "years". Nice image, though. "All in 2" should be "All In". "use it in most plants" should be "on". "she got, thanks to" shouldn't have a comma. "some of Risli healing magic" should be "Risli's". "appeared in the griffons" should be "on". "nowhere as strong as them" should be "their's". "she already had seen" should be "she had already seen". "use a cloud barrier in the griffons" should be "on". I think "And I keep what I said" would be better as "And I stick by what I said", or something. I think "picked a few very large slices of cake" should be "picked up" or "picked out". "sky ruler" should be "Sky Ruler".

Theredscare77

Dang they’ve been grinding. I can’t wait to see when they get back to brinefront. Also I wonder how the legacy is gonna work out for blue. I hope Hera gets something cool too, since it really was luck of the draw of who picked up the egg. Anyways thanks for the chapter and keep up the good work. Hopefully the Alex and Helena and Bonnie haven’t self destructed too much and they get better when blue and Hera get back.


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