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Chapter 259 - Setting up the board

🕑 Added 2021-06-12 16:44:38 +0000 UTC

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Aldous Russell

Thanks! "the human's house" should be "the humans' house". "possibility for" should be "of". I think "that in nature, it was almost" would be better as "that, in nature, it was almost". I think "Only during the party, when she ... inside that she" would be better as "It was only during the party, when she ... inside, that she". I think "how the create soil would affect it" should be "the create soil spell" I think "the incoming fight" would be better as "upcoming". "Did anyone told Fethy" should be "tell". I think "to hit-and-run tactics" would be better as "to use". I think "were all helping them" should be "had all been helping". "the human's fourth attempt" should be "the humans' fourth". "of the Totrak's" should be "of Totrak's". "on her other hand" should be "in".


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