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Chapter 260 - The Sky Ruler

🕑 Added 2021-06-14 13:00:05 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections!

Aldous Russell

Thanks! "When the small pink skin got closer" should be "skins". I think "It had lived for over millennia" should be "for millennia". "Sky Ruler reflexes" should be "Sky Ruler's reflexes". "much similar" should be "similar". "and pushed one towards" should be "pushing". "after splitting into" should be "after splitting it into". "She rose pillars" should be "raised". "problematic. Using" should be a comma. "kill the monster at range" should be "monsters". I think "let its feeling" should be "feelings" or "the feeling". "life to avoid. Kill" should be a colon, semi-colon or m-dash. "had 10 meters tall" should be "was" or "height". "color in its head" should be "of" or "on". "told it I" should be "told me I". I think "that barrier, The one" should be a full stop. "from Naka, "Hera" has the speech mark in the wrong position.


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