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Chapter 263 - First Key

🕑 Added 2021-06-19 13:00:06 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! I really wanted to understand why I keep putting an W before the word Hole. I know it's not supposed to be like that

Aldous Russell

Thanks! "were running through the blacksmith's face" should be "down". "What that has to do" should be "What has that got to do". I think "Only when arriving directly in front of the captain that she stopped" should be "It was only when she arrived directly...". "sitting in the mountain" should be "on". "believe in her" should be "believe her". I think "I thought about it too" might be better as "I thought of that too". "Anyone has a better suggestion" should be "have". "open a whole" should be "hole". "is not that" should be "it's". "gave you one" should be "give". "They did found" should be "find". I think "After getting all pieces" might be better as "all the". "wording in the doorway" should be "on". I think "with a group" should be "the". "sky ruler" should be "Sky Ruler". "Can we see the other dungeon" should have a question mark. Should "system" be capitalised? "Since when the system" should be "Since when does".

Mike G.

Hah, sneaky author! Good chapter, thanks


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