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Chapter 265 - Living Fence

🕑 Added 2021-06-23 13:00:10 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections. I put the wall thing to 'climbing up the wall' since I had just used the crawling up thing

Aldous Russell

Thanks! "worked in their unique dishes" should be "on". "firsts ever" should be "first". "how long, they have" shouldn't have a comma. I think "reach outside the palace" would be better as "reach the outside of the palace" or maybe "reach the gardens". "stairs that would start at the end... circle" should be "that started... circled". "adorned the wall" should be "adorning". "coming down and block" should be "blocking". I think "look outside before" would be better as "first". I think "things might be complicated" would be better as "get". I think "places almost on top of each other" might be better as "buildings". I think "nothing had any mix of colors" would be better as "none". I think "part of the people" might be better as "some" and possibly "residents" or "citizens". I think "before coming up in the building wall" should maybe be "crawling up the". I think "doing like that" should maybe be "doing it like that". "Herra" should be "Hera".


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