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Chapter 266 - What about the flowers?

🕑 Added 2021-06-25 13:01:03 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! I don't know why, but 90% of the time when I'm going to write 'Chapter' I capitalize the first two letters. Its not like that happens with every word, its just that one lol

Aldous Russell

Thanks! "CHapter" should be "Chapter". "What about the flowers" should probably have a question mark. I think "attempt of removing" would be better as "at". I think "there was only on the walls" might be better as "here, it was only". I think "was for her to be affected" might be better as "was to be affected". I think "she would try anything like that" would be better as "she had tried anything like this". "to medicine She" is missing a full stop. I think "that is us" might be better as "that's us". "picked a long white box" should be "picked up". I think "all would" might be better as "would all".


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