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Chapter 267 - Decorations

🕑 Added 2021-06-26 13:00:05 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! I just fixed them.

Aldous Russell

Thanks! "using her [Observe] in the people" should be "on". "they all vary in height" should be "varied". "one taller round, one" shouldn't have a comma. "Can You" should be "you". "I rather" should be "I'd". "her highness" should be capitalised. I think "now, the" would be better without a comma. "someone already decorated" should be "had already". I think "silverware on the table and any other decoration" would be better as "silverware on the tables, along with any other decoration". Should "names of all the plates" be "dishes"? "clamping" should be "cramping". I think "Raise Stone, which ... fight to raise" would be better as "Raise Stone, which ... fight, to raise". I think "higher up in the incline" would be better as "on" or "higher up the incline". "I can keep this for" should be "up for". I think "just to keep it" would be better as "it up". I think "Maybe in the future, that changes" would be better as "Maybe in the future that will change". I think "Hera did a once over every vine" would be better as "Hera gave every vine a once-over". I think "in the ceiling" would be better as "on" or "at". I think "gave more mystic air" would be better as "gave a more". I think "peek over the cloud" should be "out of".


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