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Chapter 268 - Ring the wedding bells

🕑 Added 2021-06-28 13:00:09 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! That is one of the possibilities

Aldous Russell

Thanks! Guessing the hard version is to get the Princess together with the stableboy/girl. I think "just picked the glass" should be "picked up". I think "cloud in the ceiling" would be better as "at" or "on". I think "madness has taken over you" would be better as "taken you over" or "come over you". "Hera tried to show them" should be "had tried". "'freezer.'" should be "'freezer'." "do you think it's just" should be "is just". "covering their entire bodies" should be "body". "one of the light shafts to catch" should be "shafts catch". "clouds ... behind it" should be "them". "in his eyes. a" has an extra "a". "cliche" should be "cliché".


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