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Chapter 269 - Tarot

🕑 Added 2021-06-30 13:00:07 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! Well, that's part of the reason she got the skill

Aldous Russell

Thanks! Seems like Hera already had that skill - she got a girlfriend out of tripping over a catapult. I think "a ceremony with your future children" might be better as "for". "cleaned his throat" should be "cleared". I think "me asking. Why" would be better as a comma. "how they've met" should be "they'd". "For fuck’ sake" should be "fuck's". "I am a seer child" should be "I am a seer, child". "glanced at blue" should be "Blue". I think "card to pull" might be better as "draw". Maybe. I think "had the drawing of several golems" should be "a". I think "tolls of life" should be "toils". I think "could be possible" should maybe be "should". "twirl on their axis" should be "axes". "They speed up" should be "sped". "Storm Cloud of Golem" should be "Golems" (x2). I think "chance of leading" should be "of it".

Theredscare77

Thanks for the chapter. I’m so confused by that new skill. I hope we figure out hera’s tarot card relatively soon. Anyways keep up the good work.


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