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Chapter 273 - Dungeon Surprise

🕑 Added 2021-07-07 13:01:04 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! I changed the spell to Water Spring. I had used sprout thinking it was when a tree was 'leaking' water. but in the end even that was wrong lol. And water spout is a bit too violent for what Hera is doing.

Aldous Russell

Thanks! I think "that they went out" would be better as "were out". "she picked her tablet" should be "picked up". "it was still 6 P.M." should be "still only". "picked some of the french fries" should be "picked up" or "grabbed" or something. I think "I can't mix with" should be "mix it". I think "Water Sprout" should be "Spout". "should be a palace that exists" should be "place". "Did their actions have affected this place" should be "action affect". "sent our bests" should be "best". "like it was in the normal mode" should be "like in the".


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