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Chapter 275 - People don't make sense

🕑 Added 2021-07-10 13:00:06 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections!

Aldous Russell

Thanks! "back on earth" should be "Earth". "tried to get help them" should be "tried to help them". I think "that since a gate" should be "since a gate" or "since one that leads to a gate". I think "moving for two minutes when they found" should be "until". "What that has to do" should be "What does that have to do". "to line their pocket" should be "pockets". I think "pick up her handaxe" should be "draw". "Why the dwarves stopped to pick gold when the entire room is ablaze." should be "Why did the dwarves stop to pick up gold when the entire room was ablaze?" "collum" should be "column".


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