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Chapter 238 - Hunter Biome

🕑 Added 2021-05-07 13:01:03 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! I Just fixed them!

Aldous Russell

Thanks! "what are the scouts" should have a question mark. "You waited to rub that on my face" should be "wanted... in". "What kind of test" should have a question mark. I think "but it was expected" would be better as "but that was to be expected". "speed-up video" should be "sped-up". "as it was being punished, blood streaming out of its wounds" should be "they.. their". "stopped the men" should be "man". "some meat in their bones" should be "on". I think "in the middle of a run" would be better as "of running". "closest group from her" should be "to". I think "who was the reason for the hunt" would be better as "the instigator of", or something. I think "all the people in there" would be better as "in the village". "still seemed to be working" might be better as "seems". I think "it would be that if" should be "be if". "fear in the human's eyes" should be "humans' eyes".


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