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Chapter 239 - Reason to hunt

🕑 Added 2021-05-08 13:01:01 +0000 UTC

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Aldous Russell

Thanks! I think "how that went well" would be better as "how well that went". "who had the locket grab one" should be "grabbed". "tree figures" should be "three" (x2). "humans walked on earth" should be "Earth". I think "good look on things" would be better as "good viewpoint". "knowledge from earth" should be "Earth". I think "that one I can" would be better as "can do". I think "pull the show" would be better as "pull up".

Mike G.

Aw, the poor Talaruk :( I was hoping Hera's extra reward would be a baby Talaruk pet...


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