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Chapter 240 - Watch Party

🕑 Added 2021-05-10 13:01:04 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! Some of those mistakes made me want to kick myself. If only I was more limber

Aldous Russell

Thanks! I think "very mechanic" would be better as "very mechanical". "how was he like" should be "what". I think "that wasn't another monster" should be "that it wasn't another monster". I think "how no one ever saw them" might be better as "how come no one ever saw them?". "stumble around them" should be "stumble on them". I think "Did they ever talk" should be "Do". I think "the better you are equipped" might be better as "the better equipped you are". "in the target's respective page" should be "on".


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