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Chapter 242 - Boothudurn Doorway

🕑 Added 2021-05-14 13:00:07 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! I really need to pay more attention when I rewrite sentences. Some of those mistakes were because of that.

Aldous Russell

Thanks! "I pass" should be "I'll" "Oh yea" should be "yeah". "unreasonable strong" should be "unreasonably". I think "If she had learned anything was that Blue took ages" would be better as "anything, it was". Maybe. "After a lot of insistence from Silah, that Hera agreed" should be "Silah, Hera agreed". "close off" should be "closed off".


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