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Chapter 243 - Sky Ruler's Spawn

🕑 Added 2021-05-15 13:00:06 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections, they are all fixed now.

Aldous Russell

Thanks! I think "king Rutigan" should be "King Rutigan" (x2). "Only one monster that comes to mind" should be "monster comes". "too dangerous. The king at the time" should be a comma. I think "How different you feel that our society is" would be better as "How different do you feel our society is". "them supermarket" should be "supermarkets". "pandora's box" should be "Pandora's box". "races native from the MAZE" should be "to". I think "gathered on the guard" should be "in" and maybe "guardhouse"? "bitting" should be "biting".

Mike G.

Good chapter, thanks... next chapter should be very interesting!


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