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Chapter 244 - Cloud Barrier

🕑 Added 2021-05-17 13:01:03 +0000 UTC

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Perizou

Thanks for the corrections! I really nned to remember that is ground coffee and not grounded.

Tyler Babcock

I know for sure its on the list of things to include in the future. But don't forget to remember for Naka to never call Hera by the right name before she leaves.

Aldous Russell

Thanks! "Human's attributes" should be "Humans' attributes". "grounded coffee" should be "ground". "what it actually" should be "what actually" I think "Not only it couldn't" would be better as "Not only could it not". I think "more trouble to see" would be better as "more trouble seeing". I think "could only imagine" would be better as "couldn't imagine". I think "moved over the entrance" would be better as "over to". I think "walking over the corpse" would be better as "over to" or "around". I think "those damn things" would be better as "these". "in the next one" should be "on". I think "frustrated that not even after praising her, the captain stopped" might be better as "that, even after praising, the captain didn't stop".


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